Can’t wait for the next chapter:)
"Even though it’s just the first chapter, you managed to really capture the reader into the story. I really look forward to the rest of the story, because the plot seems really exciting and the protagonist seems like a person with an interesting personality. Also, you are really talented regarding your writing style. The synonyms you are using are making the text varied. You also managed to find the perfect point between guiding the reader and letting them space for imagination.
I am so excited for the next chapter! I hope you post it on here soon :) i can’t wait to read how they meet, how the story continues and how the characters are developing!
Have fun writing the next chapter!
(Sorry for my bad englisch and for the mistakes, english is not my first language)"