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Would've said I'm speechless but I'm writing

"My goodness I normally find myself a tad disconnected from characters and all but this book literally made me almost cry.. It was so heartfelt and the fact that it's based loosely off the little mermaid but yet so different is really really nice not many people can write a book based on something and make it so original. I'd definitely share this book to people who actually love reading. You did an excellent job Aurora I'm definitely reading more of your works!"

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I loved this story

"I like that it was so similar to the little mermaid yet so different. I would definitely recommend it to alot of my friends who actually read. I give this book 5 star rates because it was absolutely lovely and tragic I love being broken over a book or movie and the author was able to that so I am glad."

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Painful, yet beautiful

"I'm completely at loss for words, honestly. I did not expect such an ending. Your writing was poetic, sweet and magnificent as usual, and the plot was just as awesome. I literally don't know how I should describe everything. Simply a masterpiece, and everyone should read this."

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Under Murky Waters

"I love this book. It's got plot twists, romance and a bit of a mystery too! I never thought I would enjoy a book like this, but I do!"

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Under murky waters

"I really enjoyed reading this. It turned out completely different from what I thought it would be. A great story "

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Under Murky Waters

"A truly amazing story! Great storyline, well-written and unexpected. Good structure and not tiring at all! Leaves you wanting more but slightly kills you at the end. Woold recomend 100%. If you're into supernatural and fantasy this is a story for you. "

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Loved it but so sad TwT

"It was so beautiful and sad TwT amazing story"

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Ok ok ok

"I love ❤️ this "

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Loved it!

"Absolutely loved how it was portrayed! Amazing writing style and I really enjoyed it throughout :D "

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I want more

"I really enjoying this story and would have loved a book about them. Great new ideas"

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Amazing short story!

"Very good adaptation of The Little Mermaid!!! not much difference in storyline but a truly amazing interpretation from the writer! Really loved the general plot of it, the language used~ a good read 💖"

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Under murky waters

"Its an amazing book that keeps me entertained while reading, and because im a HUGE fan of the whole sirenxsailor trope, i love this even more. But there are some punctuation mistakes and wrong word choice. But overall i LOOVEE"

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