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The dancing Angel

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Summary

Love is often cruel, but open your heart to it for draft N/A

Genre
Poetry/Romance
Author
Talia
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

You fell from heaven

And I hated you

You looked too much like her

And I felt cheated

Our hatred was mutual

And my freedom denied

By some stupid little girl

Who I thought

Believed to be god

Yet as time passed

I fell for you

In more ways than one

I became protective

Fearful of anyone close

To you

Besides me

We found the fragments

Day by day

And I loved you more and more

Then I saw her again

Risen from the grave

And I became conflicted

I saw your sadness

But was helpless against her gaze

Then I realized

You loved me too

I was never able to confess it

Not as long as she lived

We collected the last piece

And knew you had to leave

You wouldn’t come back

You couldn’t come back

And so as you began to float into the sky

Back into the heaven from witch you came

You pulled down on my arm

And kissed my lips

With tears in your eyes

And you let go

And disappeared

So I promised myself

I would wait

Till you fell from heaven again

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