What is your opinion?
Amazing story
"The story for this book is so moving, I couldn't stop reading, the only issue was with how the speaking lines were arranged as the were all put together unlike other books. But the storyline is amazing and if this story is finished at this point I will be quite sad. The book overall is a 10/10 and i can't wait to read your other stories. Well done! 😀"
Exciting!
"I love where this story is heading, and I want just keep reading it!!! Seriously I love the dynamics, especially with Cass and Lily its adorable- my only hang up, and why I gave a 4 for the technical skills, is that the dialogue isn't space out. In books and stuff the dialogue is very much separated from one another, but in this work it's just one chunk of text. It can get confusing when reading to keep track of who is saying what, simply because its all one big thing. BUT that is my only critique. I genuinely love the story and think it has a lot of intrigue going for it, you have the ability to maintain several different plot lines all at once (like Cass and her date, Fiyero and Lily, and now Lily's parents!!!) the plot is ever thickening and I cant wait to read more! Wish you the best of luck!"
