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Great writing!

"Very engaging story! As someone else commented, there are some spelling and grammatical mistakes, many of which a writer might not catch unless they read it out loud. I hope there are either more chapters forthcoming or a sequel in the works. I want to know what happens next in Derek’s life. I suppose the homecoming scope of this book has run its course, so maybe there’s another story with these characters in the future 🙂"

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Cute story

"Very cute story about exposed secrets bringing a family back together. My only question is, what happens with Declan and Clarissa? Needs to be a follow-up of just their story."

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Surviving Home

"Great story. I could hardly put it down. Finished it in a few hours. Well done until the last couple of chapters when the mechanics started to fall apart. I assume it was because of the desire to hurry it up and finish it. :)"

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Surviving home

"This was a nice story. Unfortunately, I found it lacking enough depth. It doesn't gel nicely for me. It seems to include things/people without enough background connection, it appears to be just thrown in. There was a lot to like about the story and I feel it has potential. I loved the characters and the personalities you were building when suddenly the story came to a crashing halt. 🤔"

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I dig it

"I'm not sure where it's going but I'm enjoying the ride"

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