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Tunnel Vision

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Summary

An ordinary train ride for one man morphs into a life-changing, irreversible experience. In a series of unfortunate, yet inevitable events, a man's life is turned upside down and inside out. Stuck in a perpetual state of dream-like unawareness, the passengers of this train hold no qualms to being manipulated and controlled like puppets. Why? Perhaps because, compared to the alternative, this state is much more preferable. However, what would happen, if one dissented?

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Complete
Chapters
4
Rating
5.0 (2 reviews)
Age Rating
13+

Preface

A few of my classmates and I participated together in National Novel Writing Month in April 2018. This short story was originally meant to be one of 12 short stories for an anthology, but I ended up only writing one of them. But, hey, I’d rather write 12 quality short stories in 12 months than a dozen mediocre ones in a day. A lot of inspiration for this short story came from sci-fi shows like “Black Mirror”, “The Twilight Zone”, and “The Outer Limits”. However, the inspiration of this story is derived mainly from a story my father told me. One day, during the dawn of the smartphone revolution, while traveling on the train downtown, he looked around to discover with awe an eerie revelation: that everyone was engulfed in their phones, except for him and his flip phone. To quote my dad, “It felt like being in the Twilight Zone”. I thought it’d be cool to do a dystopian twist on his experience.

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