Chapter 1
Prologue
10:43 AM ENGLAND UNDERGROUND COMPLEX LEVEL 6 WAR ROOM
Sir said a voice it was Jones we have a report from agrent 2 very well leave it on my desk sir a minute passed and the sound of the report being placed on the desk didn't come Dave look up see Jones standing there a folder on the folder was a red tag witch meant the contents of the folder was classified to the highist level Dave was very surprise he never been though a red tag you sure is this for me Jones I'm sure it's all way from H.Q Dave stood up and lent over the desk taking the folder in his hand
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RED TAG
Dave had stirred donw that the folder for last 10 minutes finally Dave opened the folder
CLASSIFIED LEVEL 10
COMMUNICATION LIST
AGRENT 2
LOCATION NK
OCTOBER 1ST 13.34
A KPA RECON TEAM HAS BEEN SENT UP IN TO THE MONTENS WITH A CHINES SCIENTIST WAITING TO FIND OUT MORE INFORMATION
OCTOBER 1ST 7.25
LOCATION NK
CONTACT HAS BEEN LOST WITH KPA RECON LAST COMMUNICATION WAS FROM THE TEAMS CHINES SCIENTIST MESSAGE GO HAS : FACILITIE 10 HAS FALLEN AMERICAN KILLER HAS ESCAPED MY SECURITY TEAM HIS DEAD I HAVE LOCK MYSELF IN A OFFICE IM INFECTED I REPEAT FACILITY 10 HAS FALLEN AMERICAN KILLER HAS ESCAPED MY TEAM IS DEAD IM INFECTED : MESSAGE END
Dave look up from the folder his head spinning what was American killer and what was a Chinese scientist doing with the north koreans and what is facilty 10 Dave got up and walked around his office taking a break from his reeding finally Dave sat back at the desk ready to read
LOCATION NK
OCTOBER 2rd 8.06
A SECOND TEAM IS BEING WENT TO FACILITY 10 THIS TEAM CONSISTS OF THERE SQUAD'S OF KPA COMMANDO'S THERE APC,S AND 2 TANKS THERE GOING IN HEAVY IM TRYING TO FIND OUT MORE INFORMATION ABOUT AMERICAN KILLER
LOCATION NK
OCTOBER 2RD 11.47
WARNING SITUATION OUT OF CONTROL SECOND TEAM IS DEAD AMERICAN KILLER THIS A VIRUS LEVEL 9 DEVERSTON THE KPA ARMY ARE TRYING TO CONANT IT BUT ARE FAILING
LOCATION NK
OCTOBER 2RD 20.18
EXTRACTION NEED SITUATION IS CODE RED I HAVE DATA ON THE AMERICAN KILLER VIRUS AND AM PALLING OUT TO EXTRACTION POINT 3 WILL BE THERE AT 23.30 Dave's phone office rang
CHAPTER 2
Hi THAT GEEK,
I recently went through your story "United Z Kingdom" and I loved it so much. Your setup , a locked-down war room, classified red tags, and the slow drip of terrifying reports , is tense and cinematic; I kept picturing how powerful it would look as a comic.
I really loved the War Room moment in the Prologue (10:43 AM, England Underground Complex Level 6) where Dave is handed the red-tag folder. The hush, the red tag, and the close, confidential handling of that folder would make a gripping opening sequence visually: dramatic close-ups on the folder, officers’ faces, then a full-page reveal to set the stakes.
I also loved the classified communication logs in Chapter 1 (“Red Tag”) ,the KPA recon reports, the “Facility 10 has fallen” warnings, and the line about the “American killer” / virus level 9. Those frantic entries would translate brilliantly into montage pages with radio transcript overlays, map inserts, and a rising tempo of panels that shift from clinical briefing to outbreak horror.
I specialize in adapting stories into manga/comics, and I’d love to draw United Z Kingdom into a comic/manga. No pressure though ,I just think your concept and those opening beats would make an unforgettable visual experience. If you’re interested in a paid collaboration, I’d love to discuss bringing your story to life visually! . If you’re interested, please message me on Discord (Username — david_parker32) so we can bring the story to life visually. I'll be waiting to hear from you!
Regards,
David
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