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Black Rose

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Summary

A collective poetry book of loss, death, and inevitable gloom. Open your eyes, Feel the pain This poetry's in vain

Status
5yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
16+

Anger






Cold blood

Sips through my veins

So cold, yet it burns inside

Like a magnified light ray

That could burn

The whole forest down

An emotion

That makes me forget

What drives me into it

A strong feeling

That I feel like I could punch the ceiling

That I could throw a boulder

And carry the damn rock on my shoulder

It clouded my vision

A black speck of emotion

That lights me up for faster locomotion

I can't hold myself

I can't control my breath

I can't stop the thrill

Nor I can stop the kill




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