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Limbo

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Summary

A man gets stuck in a loop. A man stuck on an infinite loop of extermely vile things happening too him.

Status
8yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

Limbo

On one sunny day Jim siddelnywoke up from a deep slumber. He was dazed and couldn’t remember what happened from the night before. He felt unmeasurable pain, like he went through the biggest thrashing of his life like he was cut open but he was extremely hungry, Jim thought that maybe he drank too much yesterday. He walked out of his room which was surprisingly neat and started down the hallway, he then passed by a room he was sure was never in his house. The room had pink walls, dolls,stuffed animal, and pretty much everything a little girl would have in her room but it was extremely messy. Jim was very confused about this but he was still unbearably hungry that he just headed downstairs for some food. When he got there he noticed that the place was a mess food everywhere, chars strewn about and the table broken in half. Jim still very hungry couldn’t really process all of this and just ate some cereal from the box, but out of nowhere he hears footsteps upstairs in his room. They sound frantic and angry almost like someone was looking for something. Jim went upstairs to see who was in his room he was scared and frightened but something told him to go upstairs and check a force he knew he shouldn’t follow, but he went up their anyways. When he was up too his room the door was wide open he saw that his room was really messy just like the girls room, and then out of nowhere a bag covers his head and he’s dragged down the steps to the kitchen there he’s thrown upon a table that imdeiatly splits in half. Jim couldn’t even stand up when he was grabbed again and was thrown against the chairs and flung at the cupboards spilling food around him. Jim while in the most pain he ever felt, still focused and could tell the man wasn’t taller than him he was even sure that the intruder had the same size hands as him. Before he could think further he was dragged down the stairs roughly and quickly, hitting his head multiple times. He then was strapped down on to a table unable to move, but he could look around and he saw something on the floor. The room was very dark but he could make out a small framed shape, then suddenly the lights came one and he saw the horrific sight. It was Jim’s daughter of 9 years old there was blood all over her, Jim could tell that her arm were broken and her legs also. But the most horrific thing was that there were holes in her cut out by a tool most likely by a saw, they were all over her body but there was a giant gaping long hole right in the middle of her. Jim now weak and crying on the verge of becoming insane heard a saw and looked back at the man hunched over a desk turning it on. Jim now having a new found determination to live tried to escape from his bindings which were locks, Jim being too busy trying to break the locks didn’t notice that the man was behind him. The man raised his saw and the with the light Jim saw the mans face, the man was Jim.

Jim suddenly woke up from a deep slumber on a bright sunny day. He was dazed and couldn’t remember what happened from the night before. He felt unmeasurable pain, like he went through the biggest thrashing of his almost as if he was cut open...

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