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"I love the book, you got a lot of things perfect and you did an amazing job. Though, if you ever read about Laughing Jack, he was a colorful clown who was made specially for a kid, whom I forget the name of him, who turned into a killer. When the boy was grown up, Jack was left in his music box rotting away. He lost all his colors. Then after years in his music box, he was released into the world. His first victim was the boy. Also, Jack was created to fit the boys personality, so a killer made him crazy. It's a beautiful plot, and the fact that you made Slenderman have to make himself work to get to the top, even if he was always on the top, made it nice. Your writing style is nice too. Don't judge me, I'm from Wattpad, and love Gore. Thank you"

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