What is your opinion?
Incredibly Earnest
"The characters are all fleshed out nicely, and this is an incredible base for future stories. It's all so genuine and giving me a lot of fun reading this. The foreshadowing and revealing secrets about the characters doesn't currently have any subtly but that comes in time. I've really enjoyed reading this so far."
Loved this story
"Loved this story ❤️ it was heartwarming and I loved their relationship it was so cute"
Interesting
"I loved everything about the book, I felt like it is going and a very good pace and it is very interesting to read "
Nice
"Was very different in a good way "
Loved it, everything!
"A fantastic book. Loved it. "
Unique
"I genuinely enjoyed reading this book. The plot is unique and I haven’t read anything like it since. I love that it is a BXB novel where one has a kid. I’ve wanted to see a book like that for a long time but have not found one until this book."
Great
"It was really nice and kind. I loved every bit of it. Awesome Job.🙃"
Sweet
"This was a great book it was sweet and very well written had lots of heart in it "
Poisoned Lights
"Liked thr plot a lot.. Lost myself and track of time while reading... The endibg came a bit too sudden. "
Nice
"I really liked the pace of the story and how we got to know more about the characters little by little. I would definitely recommend to friends and family."
Awesome short story
"This short story is good loved it "
Beautiful
"This is a beautiful novel. It is quite realistic in the sense that not everyone can change their views in the end and not everything would end in acceptance and rainbows. But life goes on so we have to forget about the hurtful past and move forward to create happiness for ourselves along the way, with or without them. I think the ending was quite satisfactory nevertheless and I'm very happy for the protagonist, he got a loving and wonderful family out of this ordeal. And on the side note, Oliver is a very understanding and wise kid. Love him. "
Speechless
"I loved this so much. Everything was connected and how the author used their words to express the feelings of the main characters. It was honestly a great read. 👍👍👍👍"
Poisoned light
"The plot was really great❤ But I think you went a bit too fast with the details. Next time try to slowdown and make the book a lil longer. Also, It wld be nice if u wrote a sequel of Jack and Michael..They are just so cute that I cant get enough of them...❤ Keep writing and keep sharing. All the best 💫❤"
Poisoned Light
"The story is incredible! Your writing style is incredible but there were some parts where too much detail was thrown in at once or everything got confusing and certain things were forgotten or mixed up. Overall, really good but I would just suggest going through and editing some things. Also, it would be really cool if you wrote another one so we could see what Michael and Jack and Oliver's lives are like in the future! Thank you so much for this wonderful story!"
Poisoned Light
"Wait, is there by any chance you will make a sequel about Jack and Micheal? I really need to know what will happen to them🥺❤️ i really love this book tho! It's amazing! 💕 Wish you all the best and keep up with the good work. 👍🏼❤️"
Poisoned light
"I like how there was a little bit of mystery behind the characters ...like its not just what you're seeing there's a story and what not ....its really great but i guess it should be abit longer or something there were moments when i felt like it was rushed ...I assumed its because you wanted a short book ...but it doesn't change the fact that it was a good read.."
Poisoned Light
"The ending is a little weird and the storyline is kinda rushed? But it's nice! I enjoyed it~ "
Spark of reality and understanding was what catch my eyes most
"Hey! So i just completed this story. And boy, it was nice. I mean it was really different story than i usually read, but in a good way. So yaa i like it. Good story. But from a critic's point of view, i think story was good, but somewhere it lacks emotion, like really deep heart-wrenching emotions. Other than that i m happy, and book was worth my time."
Poisoned Light
"The story is short but all in all it is good. It is better to have a short and well written story than one that drags on that becomes boring. I am looking forward to reading this author's other works and thank you author for sharing ur story to us. "
