Writings from the heart
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Writings from the heart

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Summary

Random, tears and love and anything you want to request. I am 17 and have just joined inkitt and this is my first attempt with writing, so please criticize but be gentle. These poems are written in the heat of the moment and some may contain depressing information but is worth reading. All things depicting a past are true of my past so be gentle or you will be reported. I am a open person and the things I write about show parts of my life. If the "chapter" you are reading is personal to me it will tell you the content is real in this particular chapter. Thank you and Enjoy!!!!

Status
8yrs ago
Chapters
4
Rating
3.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
16+

An angel has fallen

An angel has fallen and left me in his wake... Does he feel pain like I do? Can you see his scars like I do or are they invisible to you? Is it possible he was sent here just for me? You see, his halo and wings were taken from him as he was cast down to earth. Here to fulfill a plan, which was devised by our creator. He showed me how to love.


But now my angel has left me, though he promised to always be by my side and in my heart forever. This place is temporary but we are permanent. When I am asked "What does heaven look like to you?" I say my spot is a glade of fresh cut grass, upon a hill under a bright blue sky with not a cloud in sight and the sun is shining and it is me laying in his arms. We are laughing and cuddling.


That is my heaven and it is mine so long as I am with him. Every single moment I spend with him is a slice of Heaven that I know will inevitably be interrupted at some point. When I die my Heaven will be eternal and uninterrupted. An angel has fallen....


He saved me from myself and to him are my thanks and my heart. It is no halo but it is as pure as gold and it is my gift to him so he may feel and be warmed with love. I love you my fallen angel and I set you free of any and all burdens you have carried for you have executed his plan so beautifully. So, be free...

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LKA

This is very well-written considering I've seen comments from you saying you aren't confident about your writing. I like the description and the sort of mysterious atmosphere it makes.

8 years

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