CONTROVERSY II

Hester: Very good, was short too the point , not lingering on the abuse, pity you didn’t let him step in earlier knowing the abuse was happening, but this is almost real for some women who have gone through it, just wish they could all have a princess at te end of thete tunnel

Catherineb83: Story good just would have liked her not to wear a mask

marthapetrie: I like stories like this. They move quickly and make me feel good.

Ashley: I enjoyed the story. It was a short one so the fast pace fit. I think something should be put in to show a time jump between paragraphs like a "****" just to make it easier to follow when we skip to the next day week or month. Over all a good read.

barb7604: Very good story, but glad you are writing a longer version. The end came way to quick without any of the previous drama

Carla Little: I love how down to earth and kind this story is. This story could help ppl with, and who have been struggling and dealing with abuse and trauma. A great story that I will read again.

Jessica Lee: Such a good read! Stayed interesting and a happy ending. Didn’t leave me hanging

Cynical Optimist : I devoured this story. There isn't much to say that hasn't been said already.This is a wonderful feel-good read.

Agatha: I am enjoying the book. The plot is not cliche and the writing is good. Looking to the next part in anticipation