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HeavenlyFire
"The plot and the characters was beautiful. I loved the story development and everything. Somethings you do need to work on tho is identifying your point of views. For instance I always got confused when the point of veiw would shift from Kai and Jackson to Scott and Katie. It never gave you kind of like a head start. Another thing I kind of picked up on was how in certain parts of the book it seems like your words or thoughts got jumbled up. Like there was so much you wanted to say, but didn't know how to say it. Otherwise this was a great book and I can't wait to read more of yours. Keep up the good work."
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"The book so far is good."
