What is your opinion?
Good story that needs editing
"This story could be an absolute winner! It needs heavy editing. Please correct. "
Dlmccoy [
"I really enjoyed this short story. All physically, emotionally mistreated women need to read this. Similar things like this has happened in the real world, all over the world. A very good read indeed."
Awesome story
"I liked the girl being strong against an abusive husband....... I would recommend it to everyone "
Broken Vows
"So far, I’ve read the first two chapters, and it’s not bad at all. The story has potential, and I’m curious to see where it goes. Looking forward to reading more!"
Broken vows
"👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍"
Review
"Different and unique "
Ended too quickly
"Loved the plot and was just getting to really like Kristen, but it ended too abruptly. Much more could have been written with regard to the divorce process. With such a big build up and Todd’s threats, then it just ended. Disappointed as this was getting to be really good."
Broken vows
"The book is really nice. I like the part were women can stand for herself and her friend helping her is her up-down. While reading the chapter I never felt note and wanted to ditch the chapters. The only remark I have to give is that the writer is to add a little more proper addressing the characters it was little bit hard while reading to know the character played the role."
needs improvement
"The idea is good but the author's writing style is poor. Sometimes I get confused , what is the author trying to say . the author should really improve his/her writing style BUT the idea you have is great . It could be elaborated a little bit more."
Slow
"It's really slow at the beginning, which can easilyake someone lose interest."
