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LOVED IT

"Xel being labeled a fighter from birth sets the tone and that standoff with Dengar adds a bold, confident edge to the whole thing."

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Love it

"Great book vod. I really enjoyed this book I read the whole thing start to finish"

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Star Wars: Kandosii'tal

"Honestly this is the best written story I've read on this app, it needs a final edit (just minor dropping of letters while typing and things) and then start droppong it on publishers desks. Well done and I have definitely read published books that don't hold a candle to this authors thorough style, intricate use of vocabulary, and canon understanding of the literary universe this story takes place in."

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