A Fera's Secret

"Plot:/ Story Structure: -The story flows well and there is a connection between each character. -Each chapter reveals elements of the story that continue to capture the readers' interest. -The reader is giving vital intel on each character and their significance in the story. -Easy to read, understand and follow. Writing style: -The writing style is unique to the author and I like the list of character names. -Dialogue flows easily. Tech skills: For a work in progress, I'm impressed. As with all works in progress, I'm sure the final edit will be perfect. There were not a ton of errors and the few I came across didn't bother me because they were so tiny. Overall: I'm excited to read the story once it's complete. It's funny, interesting, captures my attention and makes me curious about how everything will play out for the characters. The first sentence in the first page snags the reader with a hook that can't help but make the reader curious about the character, setting, and actions that follow. I really, really like and am hopeful about this story and its characters."