What is your opinion?
Good little story
"I enjoyed binge reading this on my free day"
Review
"I am absolutely looking forward to reading more, This has such an amazing plot, and I believe this book will make it very far. Just a few things to work on are punctuation, and grammar. You have talent, keep writing!"
Searching for Love
"This book is just so amazing, but i wonder why it got into the romance section as this story is purely adventure. I saw the main character's perseverance, consistency and determination to find love despite all what she went through. She's got an amazing view of love and on love, and i can say that it's quite splendid, that she didn't give up on her belief when Ethan came into her life. Although the book's just about halfway through and she hasn't found the one yet as she's still searching, i can say that it's definitely going to be an interesting ride all the way through. One thing to work on, is just your minor punctuation and grammatical errors but, i sincerely, love your writing style; it's not too hard to understand and, i can say that even a five year old can get the hang of what you're passing out. I always love reading your books, keep on writing Alexandra."
So far, so good!
"It's a lovely beginning and you exposited the characters and their interrelationships very well! I could feel that the main character and the P.A. had an already well-established relationship, and it was cute as all heck. The setting and place were written concisely and gave me exactly what I needed to follow along. However, (don't worry the bad part is more technical than anything) your sentences, while fairly easy to understand, were sometimes a bit run-on and I felt myself trailing away - waiting for a comma or full stop that never came. But, as a writing style, it really isn't the worst there could be. Lastly, and this is just personal stigma, I really didn't feel like not liking the fat index agent guy. Sure he was a doughnut, and a cold guy but the way he was described didn't make me dislike him on the spot. So I felt kinda bad when you kept positing and insinuating that he's all that bad. I figure you should just detail why he seems bad a bit more and give the audience some characteristics that would make them relate to his undesirable behavior. But being fat and not welcoming didn't strike that deal with me. Nevertheless, I enjoyed the story so far and it was entertaining to read, so I'll come by and check up if I see you updating (:."
good
"its very good but mistake are there"
