What is your opinion?
Blue haired beauty
"Love it!loveit! More sequence please ❤️❤️❤️"
Review from me
"First of all, welcome to Inkitt! I hope you like this review. I put my acidic filter on. I change my mind. I don't see any reason for me to do that. I loved the short story. Is it going to be a novel? It seems...incomplete as I see a question mark in the end. The communications between the characters were well done. The only thing you need to work on is your summary. Because it determines the reader's next actions if they are going to read it! So work on that! I believe you can improve it significantly! You lost a star for that! And I don't want counts, not interested. If you want, go ahead."
Very intriguing
"I would definitely like to know more. I am not sure if this is supposed to function as a short story or the beginning of a longer story, but it definitely has potential. I liked the interaction between characters and found your voice extremely entertaining. I was drawn in from the beginning. I would have liked to know more about why the main character (was Ryland his name?) hated the blue-haired girl so much. Not that I liked her, I just think that if you gave a brief description of their history it would help. Also, I thought that his change from hating her to thinking that she looked hot in his car was kind of abrupt. It's a good story! I like it, and I would definitely read more written by you because I really like your style. Good work!"
Blue hair
"Needs more character development bot good. "
