Inkitt
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Love

"I love love love this story! It is so interesting and i love the characters! Good job! Keep it going, please!"

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Wow

"👍👍👍👍👍👍😁"

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His hearts forbidden Desire

"The story line is wonderful Even though it’s more like folk tales But honestly you are glued with every chapter "

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His hearts hidden desire

"I loved it all....when is there more"

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Very good

"The story is great needs a bit more editing for grammar mistakes, but definitely an engaging read."

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Beautiful.

"I love this book, though I was weirded out by the brother sister love, I truly don't mind it at all. The book is well written, and just beautiful."

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Blood

"Munnnnnnnnnn"

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Superb,not like any other

"Nice,the best so far"

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His hearts forbidden desire

"Love this and all of your other stories, can’t wait for the next update xx"

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His hearts forbidden desire

"I know they are not human or live by our standards but yuk! I am a put off with them being siblings But will persevere and see what happens! The story is well written so far"

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Interesting and for sure sexy!

"So far an interesting read"

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Intreging

"Weid but good I like it so far "

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Vampire

"Good just needs a little more excitement "

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Story

"The story seems to be getting more interesting. I like this hint of a mystery about there being stuck to each other. Its seems promosing and I cannot wait to read more."

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