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When You Kiss A Jock

"I loved this! It was a great quick, steamy, and satisfying read for anytime. And so cute. I can't help but imagine a whole future of the two together."

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Wonderful!

"What a sweet short story! Love the representation in this story, it’s refreshing. I usually have a hard time finding any books with decent representation without turning it into a fetish or something. Great work!"

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When you kiss a jock

"The fact that it's homosexual makes it one awesome book.I look forward to reading more books like this"

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My favourite short story xxo

"I read it back a while ago but it popped up again and I just had to write this up. It was amazing. Short but amazing and it was everything I was looking for in a short story before bed. Author, you've done an amazing job and I think you so much for your stories. You're one of my favourites! xxo"

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When you kiss a jock

"I really liked this book, I wish i had the confidence the main character has in himself;( thats the type of person i want to be but anyways the book is an amazing book and i hope that you continue it!"

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This is a Greta short story

"I didnt like how short it was but I was still a Great story like the rest of her stories Great job "

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"One of the most short and sweet book !! Love it "

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When u kiss a jock

"It's me Deborah and I loved this book but I hate the fact that it's too short, well am now moving on to another book of urs,u did a great job but am sad cause after I read this next book am done with all ur books, please make more books, bye 🖐️🖐️🖐️🖐️😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘"

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Short but nice

"I really have no complaints with any of your stories mikayla "

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When you kiss a jock

"I genuinely liked the way the novel ended even though I was almost dead furious when it ended because it got me on the hook but the writer did a good thing ending the story there which made us either optimistic or pessimistic. "

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Awesome!

"This is awesome story. Please tell me there's hope you'll write a whole book worth please! Pretty please🙏😊"

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Cute

"I'm really sad that it ended so quickly but it was a really cute story"

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Please continue if you can

"It amazin. Love the theme of rhe book, and the character, it a good story that would be awesome if it became a big one. You should totally continue this story. I love how you write your stories"

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Please complete it like others

"I just want more of it..the story behind it..and everything..more of DylanxParker."

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Review

"I enjoyed the book so much, but it was too short. I was looking forward to see what happens after the after party. If things were going to be awkward between dylan and parker or would they actually started being friends. Even something more but less that a relationship. I noticed no spelling errors while reading the book. I would recommend the book to many people because most people i know are against the whole homosexual thing when it comes to mean but i'll surely reread the book again.... Its different but interesting. "

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Its a Cutie

"This is a pretty cute story but like most people who have read this, I wish it was longer. You just kinda cut the story off... Anyway if you ever do make this into a full story, which you totally should, please don't rush it as much. Overall, I loved this cute short story!"

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When you kiss a jock

"I was enjoying it and I really wanted to see if Parker and Dylan was going to get together ❤❤ please continue the storyyyyy !! 😢😢😢"

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Great

"The story is amazing. Enjoyed reading it."

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Rice

"This is amazing but wish it was longer hopefully you make more please!!!"

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Chaser

"It was good the ending leaves you wanting more."

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