Very good

"At first, I wasn't sure where you were really going with the story, but I think you brought that first chapter together very well. I love this new twist on fairy tale creatures being in new Rome present day. This caught my interest, and although I guessed from the beginning that the main character was a werewolf, I found it very intriguing. I like the main character, and now he's dying on the floor! I want to know what happens next! Your description of Prince Charming's hideout was very good. The only problem I had with this was the amount of obscenity, but that's just personal preference. Great work! Let me know if you post more of this story!"