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A Humbled Heart

"This is refreshing to read! I like how the Bible was incorporated into the thoughts and conversations of the characters. It is an example of what an ideal Christian life should be. It would be perfect if not for some misspelled words, missing words and grammatical mistakes. Nothing that good editing can correct! "

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I love it

"I liked the story IL love how she had great believe and confidence in God how she prayed constantly and was rewarded in the end because with God every thing is possible."

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Story behind Jade's life

"One of the best novels l have read 🤗😊 l really hope it was a book so l would keep on reading it in the future thank you author and it also puts me closer to God"

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A HUMBLED HEART

"This was an amazing story 🤩I wish it was more "

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Cinderella with a twist

"Poor girl her step mother is a sour puss Daniel is gutless but there are a few friends that could help her "

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A humbled hearts

"I love the story i can really see that the author believe in God i only wanted to see a little more emotion from the other characters like her sister and father a little more feeling wether it be good or bad but i love jades character continue believing in the almighty God good job!!"

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A humbled heart

"Good short story. Needs grammar editing "

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Its a cute fun quick read

"Its a quick fun entertaining read "

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A humbled heart

"Love this!"

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Jade

"Very interesting book it keeps you reading"

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Same

"Matured and godly novel.i ❤ 😍 "

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great one

"its a great story "

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I love this book !

"Such a sweet story! I think my favorite that I have ever read on this app, thank you so much for writing it, I was so teary eyed a lot and now it’s tears if you, what an awesome book!"

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A humbled heart

"Magnificent story 👏 "

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Such a cute book

"Like it a lot kind of like a Cinderella story"

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I like ur story and when u add religious theme it's awesome. Keep it up.i want to read more stories from u .u r talented writer.😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

"I like the story "

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It was amazing

"Oh my word,im about to stalk you and find out if you have more like these,I like the fact that it's religious,God is mentioned here,it makes me wanna deepen my relationship with the Holy Spirit and WOW you're such a great writer 😭🥺🥺🥺❤️❤️😭😭🥺🥺🥺❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️"

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A Humble heart

"This book is a great one. I like how freely the author talks about God. The characters are great. It a different take on Cinderella. First time I actually like the main character. Try it is very good. "

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A Humbled Heart

"Absolutely loved your book. "

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A humbled heart

"I loved this book so much . I cried and laughed as well truly wonderfully written"

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