What is your opinion?
Good
"It is funny "
Origin of sins
"I really love this story please update 🙏🙏🙏"
Origin of Sin
"I love this book. I can't wait until it's finished. "
So good
"Very well written"
Love it
"Great writing, pace is good"
It Sucks You In....
"This story is very addicting. I love the complexity of the main characters. At first I thought the story was slow, but as I read on I understand. I only have 2 cons: 1) the grammatical errors; which are easy to ignore because the book is so good, and 2) having to wait for the next update!!!!! Keep up the good work. I will be twiddling my thumbs waiting on the notification of an update. 😁"
Beautiflul but short
"The way its written blows my mind!! CLASSY AND NASTY. And its amazing to have a character who is very much similar to me"
Origin of sin
"The grammar is a lot no two ways about that but I’ve also learnt a lot. By the way when’s the next update. Says it’s been 8 months since the last one"
Very Binge Worthy Story
"I found “Origin of Sin” only a day or so ago and I’ve already caught up with current material. The storyline is wonderful and I’ve enjoyed it very much. I love Zuemier and Neoma’s character concepts and how they’re evolving. The only critique I can give right now is that grammar and tense need some focus. The language switches from present and past tense, as well as first and third person, frequently. This is a bit of a stumbling block for me, while reading. That aside, I’m definitely looking forward to the next installment! (Good luck with college, ThyAwkwardMoment!)"
There emotions in every creature
"I seriously recommend people to read this.. This is so underrated"
Omg
"I love this book so much. It’s an interesting and unique story line not like anything I’ve ever read before. The only negative thought I have is that I found it before it was completed and I couldn’t binge read it all in one night 😭😭 Keep up the awesome work can’t wait to read more.. hopefully soon.. 🥰🥰"
Love it so far!!
"I can’t wait to see what happens next!"
So good
"Literally it’s so good I’m already addicted I love it. I can’t wait to see what happens!"
hell yes here’s a review
"Really love how smoothly this story goes, I’m thrilled to see how this all folds out. Your writing style is great and I love how detailed you are in their surroundings, new places and feelings etc. I’ll be excitedly waiting for a new update. thank you author, for this amazing book🥰 "
Origin of sin
"I really like the idea of the book and I admit I found it hard to put down but it felt so loooong. I mean, up to this point it’s been what, 3 days of the book? Don’t get me wrong, I don’t have anything against slow paced books, but I feel like a lot of the scenes could have been cut out as they really didn’t further along the plot. For example, the chapter when she went back to the bakery, really was not needed, and could have been accomplished with a phone call and Zuemier could have been mad because maybe he heard her boss say something explicit on the phone. It just feels like the story doesn’t have a direction or maybe it does but we’re just going 5 mph towards it. "
Meh
"I like the way that the 2 principal characters are at eachothers throat in a sexy way all the time, and i’m not really a fan of the threesome parts, but hey everyone has a different taste. For the rest its a good book."
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