Good Try

"So this was an overall good thing to read but you have many grammatical mistakes which you can fix. Some lines in the poem seemed to be forced just to make it rhyme. Poetry does NOT have ro rhyme. I like your writing style You must try to write one thT doesn't rhyme cause you are forcing words in. Well one linr I fell in love with 'Fire burns but they spark it' like Woah...keep it up this was amazing."