What is your opinion?
AMAZING!!!!!
"I luv d idea......keep it up...plz post more"
Nice!
"The story was good. The idea was very nice. I liked it how you described about the characters and the kingdoms. Surely done a commendable job. I liked the plot, however there were some places where I was completely confused or I was unable to understand what was happening. Sometimes the story was narrated in first person and then in third person. Then there was this discontinuation of the tense in the story. It was in the past tense but then, present tense. Then I saw that more than three dots were used to indicate a pause. '...' is used to indicate a pause. Usage of more than three dots is quite excessive. So be careful about these things next time. I know that my suggestions might appear rather blunt but I only mean good. I made these kind of mistakes too in my book and I got these kind of comments. So I hope you find this helpful... I also hope that you understand why I'm telling this. Waiting for the next chapter.✌"
