What is your opinion?
The Chemicals React
"The Chemicals React has a very interesting premise. I enjoyed the plot line and outcome. The author would benefit from working with a professional proofreader and editor to clean up the story and improve readability. Great Promise."
My Review
"My review This story is quite suspenseful yet love the romantic moments their not too nasty it's just sweet and I love the way Ron Harry and Ginny is supportive about Hermione and draco so I rate this 9.8/10 cuz the only thing I don't like is when the other veela has to die."
chemicals react
"good story but the plot was unclear and there were quite a few grammar mistakes. "
The chemicals react
"This had a very compelling plot and it shows us details of character arcs which i absolutely loved. I am a bit of a Dramione fan so i think this is a great book for all the Dramione fans out there."
Good story (ages didn't make sense though)
"I liked the story but there was a huge inconsistency. Hermione is the oldest of the treo so at the start of the war they turned 17 when Harry could apparate. It says that the war was 2 years so he would be 19. Yet she isn't 18 yet. She would be 19 years old. The other things was that Hermine and Malfoy didn't have the same personalities but that could be changed by trauma which no one shows at all. They just had heaps of people die. Otherwise cool story line. I enjoyed reading it."
