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A coronation fit for a queen

"Timena's coronation scene really landed for me. The nervous energy of the dress fitting, the vows to the archbishop, and then the quiet aftermath with her father all felt earned. Lady Halen's advice about letting go of the past to survive gave the chapter a nice emotional close. Excited to see how the tension with Silas plays out now that she's queen."

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