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Опустошенный - " Разрушенное Доверие"

"История мне понравилась. Мне нравится Ваш сюжет. Всегда хочется чего-то поострей. В сериале Арнав был мягким и это понятно на ТВ запретят показ если он ее изнасилует да еще и в грубой форме. Анджали мне не очень нравится и хотелось бы видеть ее отрицательным персонажем. Тогда раскаянье и наказание Арнава будет более изощренным и болезненным. Написано интересно! Читаю через переводчик и все понятно. Жду продолжения истории!!! Мне интересно как дальше будут развиваться события!!! Творческих успехов Вам уважаемый АВТОР!!!"

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Devastated The Shattered Trust

"I hope that Arnav realizes what big mistakes he has made. Khushi should leave him when she finds out the truth. Arnav should work hard to regain her trust and love."

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Awesome 😎

"Very interesting concept .. amazing writer ... story line just caught my attention and I read in one go .. very nicely portrayed .. "

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Awesome ❤️

"It's amazing ❤️ upload the next part asap.... Feeling so bad for Khushi 😢 Arnav please realise you mistake fast lest you hurt khushi to the core😪"

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Interesting

"Interesting story, waiting for the twists"

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Rachel

"I really love it it's like reality where a simple misunderstanding and lies can ruin so many beautiful beginnings"

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Superb

"Dont know what is in store for khushi"

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Devastated

"Only the grammatical errors are the sore point "

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Review of TST

"Good concept. Love the spirit of female lead even when she is suffering. Still she never left her hope and her sanity. Though the male lead is doing wrong he equally suffers and waiting for his redemption to happen."

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Nice pics

"Plot is nice and interesting"

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Divesteted shattered trust

"Super awesome"

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Koyalpari

"Feeling really bad for khushi. Hope arnav will regret big time. "

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Awesome

"Awesome superb excellent amazing luv it "

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Awesome update

"Awesome update poor khushi"

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Arshi schattered

"Best story "

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Moment of destruction

"Good story, Nicely narrated. Writer did a fantastic job"

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Devastated

"I like the feel of the story. The author was able to take me through everything with simple understanding. "

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So far very interesting and differ keeps me on my toes to know what next

"Like the detailed feeling of the characters Like the flow of the story Each part could be much longer as it gets over too fast "

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Ipkknd

"I like upland stories."

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Nice story

"Its really a gud story... So far so gud"

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