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Taken

Summary

Story in progress !!!! .

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
4
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

chapter 1


You wake up late Saturday night to your dad calling you. You pick up the phone and answer it. ” dad its 10 pm. what do you want!? ” you say with a raspy voice. ” get up and get ready, we have a meeting today..” he says. ” but the next meeting isn’t until next week ” you say and rub your eyes.

" well it was moved to tonight so get dressed damnit ” he says sighing.

you hand up the phone and lay on your back. you look at the ceiling and sit up. ” why does it have to be so damn late at night ” you mutter to yourself. you stand up and grab a tight black dress out of the closet. you put it on along with some heels. you take your straight black hair out of the messy bun you put it in before you went to sleep and brush it out. as your walking out of the room you grab your hand gun and put it in your dress pocket. you walk to the garage downstairs and get in your dads car as the guy pulls in. you get in the backseat sitting next to your dad. ” when we get there, stay by the guards and don’t open fire unless necessary brooklyn..” he says fixing his tie. ” dad i have been going to these meetings since i was 13 i know the rules..” you say laughing.

A few minuets later you guys pull up to a bunker and park. your dad looks at you with a stern look on his face. ” im serious brooklyn rose.. ” he says. you roll your eyes and get out, body guards surround you from every direction. you walk in the building and your taken to the conference room to separate sides. there’s a row of men on one side of the long table, lots of guys sitting down. on the other side there’s your dads men surrounding you. you nod at them and they separate across the room. you sit in a chair next to your dads. your da sits down and your rivals walk in. you see a tall male walk in and sit down

damn hes hot

he sits on the other side of the room and smiles at you. you immediately blush. Paul ( your dads rival )sits across from your dad and everyone sits down. They start talking about drugs trades, etc. city boundaries come up. ” we can take the south and west side of town, you guys can take north and east..” your dad says. ” uh hell no my son goes to school on the west ” things start to get heated. your dad slams his fist on the table. ” Looks like your son will have to go to a different school paul!!” as they start raising their voices paul pulls out a gun and aims it at your dad. everyone jolts out of their seats and freaks out. ” dad put the gun down!! ” the cute guy says. ” son stay out of this!! ” paul yells back. ” you’re not getting the west side paul.. ” your dad says and chuckles. ” looks like your not getting your daughter until next meeting then..” paul says and signals his men. they grab you and hold you against the wall. you see the cute guy walk over and wink at you. you hear your dad screaming your name in the distance and your vision goes blurry

you black out... To be continued

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