Back to Story
What is your opinion?
The life of a little boy named Joy
"I like the story so far but the writing style and the way you used your punctuation. Wasn't good enough for a five. I love how you describe the plot and how the characters feel and what they're doing. But I didn't see the exact punctuation when the characters were talking."
good for a start
"You should focus on grammar, punctuation more because without it the story is not clear, but the plot seems okay so far. Keep writing!"
