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Wish this was a series

"Absolutely love the plot. The start of each chapter towards the ends get a little jumpy as you aren't sure whom the person is. But this could be an incredible series, especially if told from each of the main characters point of views. A book from carters perspective a book from ballerinas perspective etc. It would give a huge amount of extra context "

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Wow

"It’s not often that I get captivated within the first few pages but with this book, it was love at intro. And an amazing ending as well! I look forward to reading more MPD books"

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Amazing!

"The story line was incredible and kept me on the edge of my seat! I can’t wait to find out what happens when he gives her the world! I’m so looking forward to reading more from the writer! "

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Great story with a few discrepancies

"This is a great story but there's a lot of confusion on who's who. One instance was when Dom was talking to Carter but all of a sudden his sister was there when it was never mentioned that she was in the room. This happens quite a few times where Devani was talking to someone but you never knew who it was until much later in the chapter. "

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Devani

"Interesting "

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Good

"Different than expected but good read"

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Touch node mpd series #1

"I was riveted to this story. Couldn't put it down. Characters were amazing. Plot was wonderful with lots of twists and turns. I can't wait to read the next book. Amazing job author. I hope you continue with what you do. Your writing is exciting and awesome. I love it "

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???

"The story is amazing. It is a bit complicating. a lot of people. You need to be a detective to guess what will happen."

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Addictive

"It's a great book. Very illustrative, sultry and detailed."

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Thrilling.

"Thrilling from start to end. Hard to put down 💯💯💯"

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Touchnode #1

"Wow just wow the plot is amazing the cliffhangers is out of this world and the emotions that each chapter and each character gives of is amazing . The last 4 chapters almost had me in tears You did an amazing job I recommend this to all the young adults "

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Touchnode

"So good ❣️❣️"

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Verz fucking good

"Love this book, it's very sexual but that's not a bad think. Everybody should read the book"

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Touchnode book 1

"Great book, great book. I could not put down the book. Ur an incredible writer."

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MPD Touchnode

"Great story "

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Touch Node/MPD #1

"Your storyline had many twists and turns in it and I was unable to stop reading until the end, leaving me wanting more. Quite the experience; truly loved it. The only thing I found wrong was the grammar in several places. I look forward to your future novels, thank you."

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One of the best

"This is one of the best stories I’ve ever read. I’m a little sad that it’s done. I hope that the new stories will be just as good! "

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TouchNode

"I loved this book so much the plot and twists and turns in this book was fabulous there were a few grammar errors but honestly with how good everything else was and the book in general those errors took none of the spunk out of the book I loved this book I am in love with this book and on my way to check out the rest of the author’s content!"

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Touchnode

"Incredibly captivating story..I hope there is a second book. The author sucked me in with the first chapter and I read the whole book in an afternoon ❤️"

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Amazing!

"I literally cannot stop reading! I can’t wait to find out more "

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