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"Wow...this story...wow. No offense but the ending was depressing. I would also suggest that you do some more proofreading. Over the idea of the story was good but I feel like it was rushed. "
"Wow...this story...wow. No offense but the ending was depressing. I would also suggest that you do some more proofreading. Over the idea of the story was good but I feel like it was rushed. "