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Fayre

"Just love it"

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I absolutely adore this story.

"It's so romantic and magical. The style is very 2020 core. The music and the jokes and such. The description and world building makes up for everything though. It leaves you wanting more all the time and it's just so beautiful. My favorite point is nature. I'm obsessed with how much nature is in this story. I can feel what the main character feels. I can vividly imagine scents and feelings and see what they see. The story is art. And truly one of my favorite books. "

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good hoping for more..

"hope you continue writing.. I'm hooked with this story. "

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Amazing

"Impeccable writing"

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Fayre

"It is one of the greatest books I've ever read end I can't wait to see what happenes "

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why are there more chapters?

"WHY ARE THERE NO MORE CHAPTERS I LOVE THIS STORYy"

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Very hypnotic

"Such a captivating story. I love how the characters are evolving"

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Fayre

"I have really enjoyed reading this story. Can’t wait to read more chapters. "

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Fayre

"I like it very suductive. "

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Faye

"Please update more chapters I started this on Wattpad and need more asap "

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I love

"I loved everything 100% recommended "

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Fayre

"I like the fact that you are taking things slow with them"

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Christine

"Recommended to like minded family and friends"

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The rest?

"I'd like to know what happens next."

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Fayre

"Love the story good writing and plotting "

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Good

"I read this story a while back before I got this app, but it was really good and it was an entertaining read. The end was a little weird but idc. You should definitely try it out."

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Fayre

"Enjoyed the mix of teen drama and fantasy. The jumping of POV was rapid but kept the story moving very well. Keen to know how all the threads will be resolved only read to XI so far."

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Fayre

"Hello, I really love your story It‘s full of fantasy and I can’t wait to see what happens next! I really enjoy reading your story and I hope Fayre gets soon the chance to find out the truth about herself, her life, her family and history. "

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Fayre

"This story us so amazing ...its like a true story "

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Fayre

"I have never been so captivated by a first love story as I am by this. I can't wait to read to the end of this. Hadn't Fayre figured out the necklace her mother insists she never takes off or reveals to anyone is her trap?"

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