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"I love Breath of the Wild. I'm a little obsessed. This story is awesome. It takes me back to the first time I started the game. I love how you wrote about the Old Man. He's one of my favorite characters--besides Mipha and Link and Zelda--and I think you described him really well. I noticed a few typos, but we're human so it didn't bother me that much. I also noticed you went off of the story line, such as Link getting all four runes in one shrine. But I admire how artfully you did it. After all, you are the author. You must have a plan! Anyway, I really like where this is going. Please, please, PLEASE do more."

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