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Hey Arshichamkilig

"As always your this story is also beautiful Arshi's bond is lovely Akash, Payal and Anjali were strong And Aashi was so cute 😘😘😘 "

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Addicting

"Great story. Love the family's love for Khushi. Nice twist from the original Sheetal track. "

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Nicely written

"Good story "

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Excellent

"Interesting story."

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I fell in love with d trust she ve for her love

"True love never fails "

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Trust on my love

"Lovely concept..... amazing writing"

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Trust on my love

"Oh! I can't believe it got complete. This story kept me hooked with it. Well coming to story, I just loved this. As I don't actually like Sheetal's plot but in this story it's totally different. Here not only Arshi but I loved all the characters. Khushi is really strong and her trust on her husband is just wow. Aashi she is such a sweetheart. A bundle of cuteness. And Father-Daughter bond between Aashi and Arnav is so beautiful. Anjali is also a strong girl not that gullible girl who only know how to pour tears. Payal as Angry girl is really different and her mood swings are amazing and Aakash really had a tough time handling it. Dadi as an antagonist, she is really amazing. She really don't have a sense and if she really have it then she don't know when to use it. When she can use her mind to give Aarav everything which according to her, he deserve then can't she use that mind to atleast just once double check, or even to confirm that Sheetal is saying truth or not. She just believed whatever she said. But nonthless she really glued us to the story. So ya, a very strong character. Sheetal, she is really a dumb and a selfish girl. I really like to read this story again and again Well I loved this story very much. Sad that it don't have an epilogue but it's endind satisfied us. 🙂🙂 Keep writing such amazing stories. 😍🙂 "

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Truly beautiful

"I love this story. The way author has write the story is really beautiful. The x-factor of this story is the trust and understanding between Arshi and also Payesh and the bonding of the whole family. I like how you the author has portrayed a beautiful bond among Anjali, Khushi & Payel. The title of the name totally justified the story. Well done author 👍👍👍"

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Great

"Awesome. Loved it.will miss reading it. I’m waiting for an epilogue. "

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Very interesting

"Can't believe how cheap this woman can be and she calls herself his dadi God O'Hare her just hope Arnav throw all three of them out of his house and life forever but before that I would really like to see Arnav trashing that dadi for her cheap mentality"

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Awesome update

"Trust is needed in life"

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Trust on my love

"Plz update fast "

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Nice

"Nice update Please make sure to update next chapter as early as possible"

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That oldie has gone crazy. Please Arnav give one tight punch to her so that she stops pouring filthy things from her dirty mouth. She thinks all will like her ****** son

"That oldie has gone crazy. Please Arnav give one tight punch to her so that she stops pouring filthy things from her dirty mouth. She thinks all will like her ****** sonThat oldie has gone crazy. Please Arnav give one tight punch to her so that she stops pouring filthy things from her dirty mouth. SheThat oldie has gone crazy. Please Arnav give one tight punch to her so that she stops pouring filthy things from her dirty mouth. She thinks all will like her ****** son thinks all will like her ****** son"

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Trust on my love

"Loved it . Its just awesome . 👍🏻 keep it up "

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Good

"I like that Khushi finally confronted Dadi and the whole family now knows the problems. And Arnav is back"

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Awesome

"One of the greatest story I ever read so far read so fast now I m missing this story please upload chapters fast please"

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Trust on my love

"I expected this twist somwwhere and now i onow that sheetal and dadi is going to see the hell which is awaitng for them she touched the srong nerve of arnav which is the trust he has on his brother and wife. Pls update fast "

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Waiting eagerly

"Please don’t separate arshi and what ever dadi says Arnav should not believe her and for once Arnav should be shown standing for his wife and should prove that she is his priority. I think she will be telling about arshi been seriously sick and he was not informed about her and also she might say that arshi is not his daughter that’s why they didn’t inform. I want Arnav to show he believed dadi and Sheetal and should plan a revenge in asr way where his dadi wanted to separate him from his Angels. But he should show trust in Khushi and tell her about plan also. Hoping to see best."

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Arshi

" Story is so good 🥰🥰🥰🥰 Can't wait for arnav reaction😛🤑🤑🤑"

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