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Keeper of the flame
"I love this story hope there is more chapters or a second book "
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Flame
"I love the plot and characters but the characters are being mixed and you get confused with the name changes need to go back and reread. Still love the story. "
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Keeper of the flame
"I like the stories , but the author always mixes up The characters and I am confused because it seems like The story It's changing. It has good plots, but the author can't keep up with the storyline. S like they forget their own characters. I didn't know. I love the stories and you please. It just confuses me sometimes and it happens in all of whisper's books and they will be a good author as just they get confused with the characters and it's a lot of grammatical errors but if you need Someone to edit stories.I'm good at that and I'm using voice to text right now.So i'm not actually typing"
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83 chapters read
Need more
"Need more to the story. What happened to them?"
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82 chapters read
Great Read
"😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊"
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80 chapters read
Keeper of the flame
"I really like this book I was reading it on ireader but this is so much better lol"
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82 chapters read
Keeper of the flame
"Another great story . Story and characters strong tough. And the part on hiw she got even fabulous. "
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82 chapters read
Keeper of the flame
"I’m enjoying this book "
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72 chapters read
Keeping the flame
"I cant wait for updates "
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80 chapters read
Keeper of the flame
"I just have to say this story has come to life and feels so real. I believe it needs to continue. It is a prime example of is going on in the real world and I feel it needs to go on. I love the plot to keep up the good work. hope to see go on and have that happy ending that it so richly needs. your admiring reader. scottie"
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69 chapters read
Keeper of the flame
"This introduces all the characters "
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Love
"I love this book. It was a good read. "
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61 chapters read
Great
"Would recommend to anyone "
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71 chapters read
Cant wait
"Need up date this is a good book with the also the other ones you are writing cant wait to see what happens. "
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71 chapters read
Clubs
"Punctuation !!!"
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22 chapters read
Not a good read
"This book might have had a good story line, but the timeline is very bad; the characters aren’t well developed; the grammar and punctuation are bad; and the writing style is terrible. I would not purchase this author’s books."
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3 chapters read
Could be better
"This story needs severe editing. Between grammar, punctuation, spelling and the proper use of first and third person pov's, this story is really hard to follow. The story line is actually really good, but I couldnt read passed the 3rd chapter as the story line was rushed and it was really hard to follow with who was talking. Keep writing though author, as your stories could be really good with some editing. :-) "
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