My Savior by Pancake at Inkitt
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My savior

Summary

Peter is dead, someone like him, he can't die, can he? Marina Wright , has supported Mary Jane and Peter since the first moment. Despite the feelings for the neighborhood Spiderman, she had to suppress them for her friend. But when Peter died she found herself at night crying in the snowy cemetery and she saw them. The man and the boy who will change her life.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Prologue

Peter, what you're up to?

Nothing, and you Dolly?

I am on the sofa.

Lazy as always my friend❤️

Yes, I know, we should

Go to the gym together

More often.

Yes,

Dolly, I should go, the city needs me.

See ya later, Pete.

Last time online:10 a.m


After that message, a few hours after I got a message from Mary Jane.

«Dolly, it's important, I don't know how I should tell you this...» she said In an anxious and sobbing tone.

My sister, Angela turned on the TV and we saw the announcement of Spider-Man's death.

I then stood shocked, like Mary Jane.

We could not believe that this event had really happened.

The causes of death had been said, he had been killed by a villain.

I Collapsed on the ground and put my head in my hands.

Angela came and took me from the ground, I embrace and I consoled me.

«Angela, If only I had been Mary Jane, this would not have happened.» I said to my sister and she responded: «Marina, this isn't her fault, you know right?»

And I said: «You are right, I'm just being damned, knowing the last message was mine.»

Angela embraced me and said: «Lil Sis, I feel that your life will change, don't give up, do it for me.»


I hope she's right.


Ever since Peter and I have known each other, I've never told him the truth, I'll tell him in heaven when we will meet again.

If we'll meet again.


Without my sister knowing this, I dressed and went to the cemetery where Peter's body was buried.

«My goodness, I never thought that this It would have happened...» I said to myself Touching with my fingers, the words written on the gravestone.

«Peter Parker...The truth is that I always loved you, since we met, my love for you has never been revealed, and now I am here to mourn your death and to damn myself for not having told you everything.» I said crying, my tears warmed my face in that cold winter night.

Then behind me, I felt a hand on my shoulder, it was a young boy who came to the cemetery for the same reason.

«Ma'am, watcha doin here? Are you okay?»

The boy asked in a quiet tone and I answered: «Yes, I am ok, I'm only crying, what are you doing here at this hour?»

He answered: «I came here to give me

remembrance to Spider-man, by any chance you knew him?»

I didn't respond.

The boy then came near me and said: «please tell, more about him.»

Before I could say a word A voice behind us spoke referring to the boy.

«Hey, kid...!»

I don't know how the boy hurt him with a Lightning.

«HOLY SHIT!!» I thought I was too shocked to say something, and the boy with a cobweb attacked the man, he fainted and his body fell on the snow.

I approached him with the boy, despite the dull air, the man was extremely attractive and with my fingers, I lightly brushed his face.

He reminded me of Peter.


«...The Truth is that I've always loved you...»


On his chest he had the Spiderman symbol, I was shocked, But the guards arrived and the boy and I started running in two different directions.

I lost sight of Him and frankly, it's the worst thing that could happen to me.

We may not be seeing each other again.


I went home and my sister slept blissfully, then I walked into the room and I lay on the bed, still wearing the clothes.

I Wanted to sleep, but I wouldn't stop thinking about that man.





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1. Prologue
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Hi there!

I just started reading My Savior and I’m really enjoying it so far! I love how you open with Marina’s grief after Peter’s death and the emotional weight of her feelings for him it immediately pulled me into the story. The way the mystery of the new man and boy shows up in the cemetery was intriguing and left me wanting to know more about what happens next. I’m excited to keep reading and see where this leads! 😊 Lizzy

7 months

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