The Beginning
*Third Person*
Everything was black. I could hear mothers screaming for their husbands and children. I could hear the sound of gunshots. I couldn't see anything. Anything, except, a little smiley face...


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Be happy. Be grateful. For we have saved you. We, the smile-makers, will make you smile... forever. Don't frown. Don't pout. Don't shout. Don't. Don't. Don't. Only smile. No matter what, smile. Or we will make you smile. You will get to go have a trip to the happy room. Say cheese!
*Third Person*
Everything was black. I could hear mothers screaming for their husbands and children. I could hear the sound of gunshots. I couldn't see anything. Anything, except, a little smiley face...
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Suiihera: OMG, I just finished reading your story, and I really enjoyed it! The world you've created is fascinating. As I was reading, I could easily picture the characters, emotions, and key moments unfolding visually.Have you ever considered adapting it into a visual storytelling format such as a comic, man...
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Emily012: Fiona’s fear and resilience shine brilliantly.
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iswariya: Plot and writing style are good but at some places we cant avoid feeling like the story is dragging. It would.be good if more spicy things are added in plot to keep the readers captured.
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Sarah: Your story has become one of my favorites. I love how you developed the characters over time. Are you already working on another story, or do you have any ideas for future projects?
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CINNAZEN: I loved this book. I’m starting on book two and I’m confused because they talk about her being pregnant in the third chapter after they set off on their way to the new location BUT in this book she’s bleeding and not sure if she’s even pregnant? So that’s one of the things that’s confusing. It doesn...
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Elisa_sims: Hey! Sorry if I'm bothering you by reaching out here.I'm Elisa Sims, a fellow reader. I came across your story and wanted to ask if you'd ever be interested in custom artwork, concept art or illustrations for it. I love helping authors bring their worlds to life and visuals can be a great way to att...
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Elisa_sims: Hey! Sorry if I'm bothering you by reaching out here.I'm Elisa Sims, a fellow reader. I came across your story and wanted to ask if you'd ever be interested in custom artwork, concept art or illustrations for it. I love helping authors bring their worlds to life and visuals can be a great way to att...
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boikkc1: This was the best book I have read all year.. Sarah's grief is so real. It feels like you gave a personal experience with a traumatic loss. A very emotional read for me. Wow!
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Dhruvi R.: Honestly, I really enjoyed this story! 🛸❤️ The plot was unique, and I loved watching Annie slowly find trust and comfort in the most unexpected person. The mix of sci-fi, survival, romance, and emotion kept me hooked.Some moments had me stressed, some made me smile, and Frankie was definitely one o...
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