Inkitt
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Lovely

"Very immersive story. Love the land you created."

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Good story

"Really good read. Cliffhanger was nicely done. Looking forward to more of your work!"

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Love a good cliffhanger!

"Soooo hoping there’s another book!! Great writing, great characters, great descriptions! This story deserves more attention! "

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JAY

"Love it! Well written. "

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Simply marvelous

"I neeeed this book , it is so good!"

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Paragon

"A very interesting concept I look forward to seeing where it goes. Even possible side stories could be made. Intriguing and creative. "

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Cliffhanger ruined it

"I read 120+ paragraphs just for you to be like 'we need to go' and that's the end."

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