What is your opinion?
Perfect
"Great story "
DTMYM
"amazing story line but at some point i feel that arnav is the main cause of everything and he started blaming other for like he is showing innocent. well i only write honest review if you make season 2 try to make khsuhi more independent rather being to her daughter and the man who destroy her.. "
Pure bliss😍☺🤤
"Omg omg omg. I have a lot to say. I can write an essay of more than 10 pages about your novel. But even though my heart disagrees, i'm gonna keep it short. Also, PLEASE NOTE that i'm NOT flattering and giving extra build up. I'm pouring my heart out about exactly what i felt. 1. I MUST appreciate your writing style. Your language is so beautiful☺🤤. It's a pure bliss😍🤤. You explain the feelings, behavior, expressions, even little little things soooo beautifully and perfectly which proves the fact that "Art is deeply entrenched in your soul". I can't help but deeply falling in love with your beautiful phrases which are damn perfect. I can pull out thousands of examples but not here. The metaphors you used, the way you personified inanimate things, all kinds of imagery you have used...I LOVE IT!!! Your writing is a pure bliss. Even the title "Desire to make you mine" is so smoothly and fabulously entrenched in the story. It is so perfect how you subtly brought the title in many places with the story. 2. Emotions. Oh God you took me in a ride of roller coaster of emotions. I cried, i felt a lot of pain, i felt happy like crazy, i was so excited, i was curious, i was experiencing extreme tension, i felt deep love which made me feel like i'm living in a dream floating in the clouds even at 3 a.m.😍☺🤤. I don't even know the names of some emotions that i felt. Even though I know this is a story, while reading the last scenes of chapter 28 i literally said this to you in my heart 😂. This is a true incident😂For the very first time in my life, i BEGGED the WRITER (YES IT'S YOU) in my heart "why would you play with my feeling like this, you know i'm sensitive. I'm very hurt you know. I'm very hurt i say. Please don'tdo this to me" being unable to bear the disappointment and pain😂😂You gave me a complete adventure. I've never experienced this kind of an adventure in a book. Not even Sherlock Holmes succeeded in giving me this adventure 😂 At the end of this season 01, literally tears came to my eyes. But after seeing your note saying about the season 2, i felt a little peace. 3. I MUST say that I never felt boring while reading your story. You very well handled the story. You smoothly switched the story from present to flashbacks and twists. The way you did is just PERRFECTTT👌 Each time i was so excited to to read the next chapter. Your story is more powerful than a movie or teledrama. I can't say i "read" your book. Because it is far far far beyond than "reading". This happened for the very first time in my life. PLEEEAAASSEEEEEE keeeeppppp writinggggggggg!!!!! You're a born writer with so much art in your soul. Yes. You're a art. Art and you are not 2 different things. ONE. "Thank you" is not enough to express my gratitude for you for giving such an extremely beautiful story 😭😭Love you❤❤❤❤ With love, Sachini😊. "
Felt very bad for Kushi literally cried at some situations
"Beautifully written and narrated by at some places names of characters are changing like old lady-savitri, sumitha etc "
Love
"I literally starting crying for khushi se condition her heart❤💕 break I really like this story"
Excellent
"Everything is perfect"
I really enjoyed the story
"The book is really interesting and intriguing, I cried, and I could not go to sleep because I wanted to keep on reading, it is a very sad book, it broke my heart into pieces. I loved how it was written, and I love the plot."
Nice story
"Good story line"
Desire to make you mine
"It was a very interesting but heart aching story. I feel very bad by reading the end, literally it made me cry 😢. I'm waiting for its sequel when Khushi came back again and they lead a happy life again.💜💜 Btw this story plot is quite different from the serial. But you've written it so well"
Nice book
"Kushi and arnav are one of my favorite tv couples. So creating such a nice story i really liked it. Now i am also looking forward to read with other stories that include them. Thank you"
Luvindia
"Good story"
Hooked
"Woowwwwww ... Just wowwww"
Very well handled all darkness & twists
"Wow really nice, i like the 1st seaspn but being a optimistic person i felt bad for sad ending but after confirming by you about 2nd season.. I really hoping to get happy things in season 2..."
Revenge
"I liked the plot if the story"
Waiting till my end
"I like the story. Everything is great. All suspences are reveals on time to time... So curiosity is always there. But the sex n asexuality are unnecessary some time.. rest is good..."
