Inkitt
Back to Story

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Unexpected Pain

"I love this book so far! I'm on chapter 4 and the story to this point has been heart-felt and personal. The only critique is just simple grammar mistakes, which can be easily fixed w a bit of proof reading x. If you haven't read this yet and like emotional and romantic evolution, you would love this book and should definitely try it!"

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It was so good...I loved it🤍 expecting more..but definetely with a happy ending

"I like this so much , I am expecting more...but yes with a happy ending"

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Pain

"This is a really great book. If I could get past the third chapter I can give a better review. So far the book seems good. "

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The wolf

"The book is so good to read can’t wait to see what happens next in the book "

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Love it

"Love his dedication and love for Samantha don't like the fact he was home so long and she had her brother taken away ."

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Unexpected pain

"I love how this story is going. The plot keeps getting thicker and that makes it all the more interesting. I hope that she gets her brother back."

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Hope keeps you alive

"Captivating story "

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Unexpected pain

"Love the story....please update soon"

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