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Who I Was

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Summary

Emma has had a hard life ever since her mother left. Her whole life has been filled with ups and downs. Will someone help her through it? Emma's mother left her and her father all by themselves two years ago. Ever since that happened, she hasn't been the same. Her father has noticed her change in behavior, but he hasn't said anything to her. She doesn't want anything to change, but someone comes into her life and mixes everything up for good and the bad.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
10
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
13+

Prologue


My life use to be great; I had wonderful parents and a great home life. I never thought my life would turn into shit. I’ve tried to be happy; it never works. I can’t keep going on with my life knowing I’m unhappy.

My mother walked out on my father and me. She just left without a care in the world. My father was broken; so was I. I had to be there for my father, so I had to act strong. I’ve tried to be strong for half of my life, but everything I do is an act. I don’t want to disappoint my father.

My father thinks I’m okay; he’ll check up on me. I know he worries sometimes; I don’t want to worry him at all. I tell him I’m okay all the time. He can tell when I’m lying; I make sure to keep a happy face on whenever I’m around him. I love my father; I don’t want him to worry.

Every night it gets harder and harder to sleep because my mind never gets a break. I am continually thinking of something. It’s mostly bad things I think about; it’s mostly the ‘what ifs.’ It’s hell. I hope it would all stop; I wish I could be happy for once. I miss being happy.

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Quite alot of grammatical errors. Despite that, great story.

7 years
author

@BLACKPINK_WDW Thank you so much for adding my story! I'm fixing all the grammar problems now, thank you for pointing that out, I appreciate the feedback!

7 years
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Another story I am going to love. Just fix your punctuation. There is not much, only a couple of them, but overall doing great.

7 years

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