What is your opinion?
The Huntress
"It heldmy interest and enjoyed it."
Huntress
"Story feels a little uneven, doesn’t flow with a good pace. But I do like the premise of the storyline, and please keep writing."
Great story
"So I like the concept and I like the characters. Some historical inaccuracies but then I',m one extreemly judgey about such things. lol. I mean for my book about the saxon I read the primary source texts. I think it could became a really amazing book."
Good plot
"I'm looking forward to when this is updated; it's a really good plot that I am enjoying so far! There are grammatical and spelling errors that a thorough edit would take care of. I think the story would benefit from fleshing out some more details of the relationship between the main character and her betrothed during the 2 years from her father's death and the next viking attack, as well as further character development for her. She feels a little one dimensional/cookie-cutter right now to me. It may be because the writing was just rushed while it was fresh in the mind. Again, a thorough edit and adding some more description and details will help this. That all being said, I am looooving the tension build up between the protagonist and the viking, though! Hope to see an update on this story soon!"
