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Very Cool

"I love the Characters and the fight scenes. I like the diffent fantasy aspe and S that all tie into the story. Really neat. "

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Spectacular!!

"Dude, More people need to read this story. It kicks off right where book 1 leaves off. There are so many surprises. The fights are cool. The characters must all work together to defeat what I feel are bosses within every other chapter. You have a thing with large knives for arms, vampires, witches, a fucking mecha dragon, and fucking giant? Where do you come up with this stuff? Future Jill is back and Jolly Dejah whom we believed died at the end of the last book. I had a lot of fun reading your story. Finish it man!"

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