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Perfect!!!

"I really really like this novel. In the first book it seems like a typical wattpad story but read further!!! You won't regret it. I could say that this is one of the best, if not the best book I've read on a free online reading platform."

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"Chapter 9 was completely missing which was one of the few times The book is from Daniel’s POV so that was disappointing that I didn’t get to read it. I love the story and dialogue. Main complaint is grammar and the the use of “in anyway” every time instead of “anyway” or “anyways”, it doesn’t flow right. The plot twists are great but sometimes so much is given away at the end of a chapter. Like “but we didn’t know that yet” or “they would find out that wasn’t the case”. To do it every time there’s a plot twist takes away the suspense but there’s certain times it works really well. Overall really good series. Literally haven’t been able to put them down for the past few weeks "

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One gang and bronze battle

"I really like the polt twist of the story and I highly recommend this book to my best friend and I love your work so much keep up the great work love you 😊 Love you cabbage Queen ❤️ Stay gold,stay cabbage, Jowan Jacob."

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Absolutely amazing

"This book absolutely wrecked me. It's amazing, the writing, the plot, the character development, the deaths; all of this makes an amazing book that has my brain all fucked up ;))"

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One girl and a Bronzed battle

"This novel is so good. All the emotion wrapped up in the texts are leaping from the pages. I feel every word. Excellent writing! "

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Wonderful

"Great series with a wonderful author. The dynamic between Xavier and Amber makes my heart ache and want something like that too. Holly Shmit, thank you for writing this :)"

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Best book ever

"Reading this book is amazing, Holly imma need some tips😜"

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Amazing

"Honestly just one great book. No words. This book is amazing. literally, AMAZING!"

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Powerful.

"Holly has become one of those writers, who I wish I can write like. Her characters and how everything takes place and unravels in the story is incredible and so powerful. Simply put. It's a trilogy that has the power to keep you on your toes every second and still make you feel like home. So READ HER WORK!!! Also she's such a sweetheart. A sweet author who loves to interact with her fans. I love her for her that. But she's a satan too as a writer. She DA BEST QUEEN🥳🥳. I suggest to whomever reading the review to simply go and click on the first book of trilogy and get started. You are in for the best ride of your life. 😌😌"

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Naked souls

"Holly is a great writer. She really brings out the love of each of her characters. "

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😍😍😍😍

"I like how this book is unpredictable. I never know what Holly is gonna do to my favorite characters, and it makes the book thrilling! "

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The best I have ever read

"The whole book is literally just perfect. It keeps you at your edge and every character is so special. This is simply the best book I have read"

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I love this story

"I really love this book and I can't wait to read the rest of the chapters to come,I'd recommend it to friends and I chose that rating because the book wa excellent. "

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One of my favorite books ever. Shipping Amwen buhhhhhhhh bruhhhhh Xavier is the best and he deserves such true love so does Amber

"Gosh, the plot twist messes with my head in a good way and I love the story. Their(Amber&Xavier’s) love story looks real tbh."

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Love it!!

"I love everything about it. I've read so many smut scene and this is one of my favourite one. Good job Holly"

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One gang and a bronze war

"I wish that Lynch, jack, Calvin and Matt didn't die but I know you had to reasons I don't like to recommend this book for my sister cause she likes action and romance and a lot more"

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Awsmm..

"The charecters, the story, the warmth in this novel keeps me goin... I would like more readers to read it... js luv this series.."

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I love this story

"Unlike other books this one has lost and is real but it also has love and everything else I'll recommend this book to my friends cause is so frickin awesome"

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This book is lit :))))

"Well, this story is awesome obviously. i like the plot twists it's really unexpected. i was like "what?!?!?! i didnt see that coming". it's kinda tad bit annoying when characters die all the damn time tho i mean i know it has to happen to be more realistic but whyyy?! and on the erotic part got me slightly bored will all the talking and the descriptions, i know it's her first time to write this kind of stuff tho so it's good. all in all this book is really great with amber's badass moves. one thing, the way xavier calls amber marigold unsettles me a bit coz it it doesn't seem affectionate."

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Best

"I like this book so much It a hell ride of roller coaster I'm just so much addicted to it I just love the book All three books are great "

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