What is your opinion?
I love all of it but if you can make it were it’s more scary. The reason why I chose the rating that I did because I love all of it and it’s like perfect for me. I recommend my mom reading this and my sister
"I loved everything about it but if possible make it more scary.I recommend my sister and my friend to read this. I chose the ratings because I love the way it was made "
The wolfs date
"Omg I need more please hurry and do more chapters "
Easy, quick, exciting read!
"Excellent dialogue within the story! I love reading dialogue that actually sounds how the character would really speak. And this story had such a well-written opening paragraph as to immediately keep me reading. Well done! If this was a first draft, I would have rating it 5 stars across the board; the story definitely warrants it. But grammatically, there is a consistent need for editing. And while the story is engaging, I would love to see it fleshed out a bit. Write with your senses; what does the environment smell like? What sounds do you hear? What does breakfast taste like? What does the MC’s anxiety feel like? Prickles? Burning? Cold? So much to play with!! Excellent writing potential here! I look forward to reading more from this author! "
