I LOVE YOU SM

"I´ll just be honest, as I started the chapter, I felt as if I were winded. You established the vague setting and then introduced the main problem of the chapter. But not just that, but you made it sink. Because it was one of those openings that makes your heart sink, your eyebrows furrow, and have to look right back over what was just written just to feel that again. Essentially, the way you write is nearly enchanting and is so well structured. Can´t wait to see more..."