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Like it

"I like the plot, definitely would love more "

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What

"Are u kidding me this cannot be the ending 😧😲😒"

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This novel make me curious how it will end..gud job..i love it..

"I like all of characters..the author make this novel so good..coz make me curious how it will end.."

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Love it

"Short and sweet "

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Dlmccoy

"I loved this story. I also loved the chapter notes you wrote. Thank you. I would love more updates on this one but I’m going to read #2. I’m sure it will be as good as this one.."

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De Luca

"Awesome read lots of twist and turns strong characters excellent plot "

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So great

"I love the story! It checks all of my boxes! Spicy, sexy, thrilling, fun, "

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De Luca

"Get story. One of the best story that I had read. I had read a lot of mafia stories. I cant wait to read the second one to see how their lives keep going. "

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De Luca

"Really enjoyed can't wait to read part two "

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Do luca

"Great read thank you for sharing your story with me "

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Amazing novel💟💟

"WOW you novel was amazing. I enjoyed reading your novel and the storyline was great. I really didn't like how it ended😞 but i can't wait to read more of your novels"

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Wow

"I liked the story but it is too short for my taste)))"

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,

"These book are so damn good. I suggest you join NovelStar’s writing competition this April."

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De Luca

"Nice ..writing skills very strong characters excellent plot love the book... can't wait for the Sequel "

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🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂

"But why did his ex have to be pregnant....why...I just so wish its not his"

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De Luca

"Honestly her grammar was good. Her writing style is good and if I was her I would keep going."

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Great

"Great story"

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Fast Pace

"The only thing that matters is that there will be a second part to this. You’ll love it. "

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Wonderful!!

"Absolutely wonderful!! Page turner!! Im not going to stop reading when it comes to an end."

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Wowsers

"Great and crazy book!!! Keeps you on your toes every second. I'm a freak when it comes to grammar so that was my only issue but besides that loved it all!!!"

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