Inkitt
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Sweet

"Soo cute and sweet."

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Bit me

"I love it it keep you on the edge wanting to know what will happen next"

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Bite me

"I did really like the book (and I recommended it to my friend) but the only think that got me was grammar/spelling if you could work on that then it’d be perfect "

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The mate

"I would strongly recommend this book."

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Interesting, captivating read

"If you like reading about vampires, you will like this book. It is a quick read and keeps your attention. The story line is easy to follow. I would recommend this book to fantasy lovers. "

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Bite mry

"The story is nice....It feels real when you're reading but the writer needs to work on the explanatory coz some chapters aren't that clear...."

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Bite me

"Good book."

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Nice story

"Very interesting and keep indulged "

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Good story

"I like the story "

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Bite me

"Pretty good so far"

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Really good book

"The book or really good. Ok like the plot "

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Interesting

"The story is quite different "

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Great

"Great read"

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Bite Me

"I like the pacing of the story. I like how the story written. This is a good short story. "

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I really love your style but you could add more details on the romanticism

"Above all i like it"

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Bite me

"I Like the idea of the novel the grammar is poor"

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Good

"Good story...."

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Hmmmm

"You should edit it, the story was interesting but the grammar was very distracting, such as here instead of hear, or a word like here with missing letters so it’s he ( which made zero sense at the end of your sentences) I found myself constantly having to turn the sentences around or substituting words to make it work. All that to say the potential for a good story is there in the bones, Just have a friend read it and edit for you. Slow down, recheck your drafts and make the changes, as all writers know it’s all in the small details, don’t rush. "

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Great so far

"I live the characters personalities and would really like to give 5 stars but there are too many grammar mistakes"

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